I agree! This reads MUCH better (closer to how you described it last semester). I know that you are concerned on the run-time (I am too!)... But, I think you can shorten many of the shots. There are spaces in the film that feel like the computer setup the timing (the pacing feels very even in many spots). I think you can trim a whole minute off by tightening the timing. The establishing shot and title reveal is a very nice addition!
I agree! This reads MUCH better (closer to how you described it last semester). I know that you are concerned on the run-time (I am too!)... But, I think you can shorten many of the shots. There are spaces in the film that feel like the computer setup the timing (the pacing feels very even in many spots). I think you can trim a whole minute off by tightening the timing. The establishing shot and title reveal is a very nice addition!
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